I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sapphire! Riley here This look's great i glad that you are proud of yourself! this brought me back we i made this line art where you have a picture and you have to trace it? i think how come you made this? i would love to know how! anyway i have to go Sapphire bye!have a good day
Hello Sapphire Chevelle here. I enjoyed the part when you put more detail into it by putting a wing in it very good detail. Did you think about putting in more fluff to the legs. How come you didn't put a mouth.
Hi Sapphire it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you made a kiwi it looks so cute and I like the brown pattern so it looks like it has fur. This reminded of me when... are you tryna copy the one in kiwi can you know that staff toy that look super cute it kinda reminds me of the kiwi staff toy in Kiwi can. Next time you could change the background of garden so it's like it's lost it's mother but I still like it cause it cute blog ya later bye now :)
Kia ora Sapphire Bea here! You are really good at this sapphire and this is why I pick this cause it's really amazing and maybe next time you could put a blog post about kiwi and you really did it and your picture of a kiwi was really cool and hope you really have a fun day! Blog ya later!👍👍
I really like your kiwi you made its fantaci this looks like it took lots of time its really good next time you could writ more of what you had to do Ill blog you later
Hi Sapphire, It's me, Phoebe. I like the way you make the kiwi bird colour on the body, I like the kiwi bird eyes because it's so cute. I love it! Your picture of the kiwi bird is so good!!!! Did you know that kiwi bird doesn't have wings? Maybe you could do it without wings. Bye!
Hi Sapphire, it's Kareem. It's cool how you made it look nice and I like how the kiwi's body has feathers on it. Next time you could put a title so that it's easier to get to the blog post.
Hi Sapphire, nice job on your custom kiwi. Your blog post is very amazing as well as your kiwi. How much time did you spend on this kiwi? What is your next step? I think you did a good job on the blog post but I think you just need a better introduction and paragraphs in the post. Other than that, Great job!
Kia Ora, Sapphire! I like your kiwi! It's well made, and it's very cute! What shapes did it take to make this, and how long did this take to make? You did great on this blog post, but I think you might need better informaton to tell the reader all about your post. What was your favourite part of making the kiwi? From Mikayla.
Kia ora Sapphire Acasia here! This blog post is amazing and I really like your post as well as your kiwi! Maybe next time you could add more information about the post and you're kiwi like for an insaple you could have made a name or something but other than that this is an amazing post! Good job
Kia ora Sapphire, You have done very well on the post, I love how you have made such a great kiwi. Maybe next time you could add why you did this. When did you do this? That's all from me bye.
Kia ora Sapphire its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school, I like your blog post about this kiwi its really cool one quision is how did you make this kiwi. Maybe next time add a bit more info about this kiwi. Bye
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Hi Sapphire! Riley here
ReplyDeleteThis look's great i glad that you are proud of yourself!
this brought me back we i made this line art where you have a picture and you have to trace it? i think
how come you made this? i would love to know how!
anyway i have to go Sapphire bye!have a good day
Hi thes is james thes is interesting
ReplyDeleteHello Sapphire Chevelle here. I enjoyed the part when you put more detail into it by putting a wing in it very good detail. Did you think about putting in more fluff to the legs. How come you didn't put a mouth.
ReplyDeleteKia ora!
ReplyDeleteI'm Basty and I like your work of that Kiwi almost look like miss morgan's it's cool!
maybe you could check my own blog! :D
Hi Sapphire it's Raewyn. I enjoyed the part when you made a kiwi it looks so cute and I like the brown pattern so it looks like it has fur. This reminded of me when... are you tryna copy the one in kiwi can you know that staff toy that look super cute it kinda reminds me of the kiwi staff toy in Kiwi can. Next time you could change the background of garden so it's like it's lost it's mother but I still like it cause it cute blog ya later bye now :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Sapphire Bea here!
ReplyDeleteYou are really good at this sapphire and this is why I pick this cause it's really amazing and maybe next time you could put a blog post about kiwi and you really did it and your picture of a kiwi was really cool and hope you really have a fun day!
Blog ya later!👍👍
Hey Sapphire its Connor here
ReplyDeleteI really like your kiwi you made its fantaci this looks like it took lots of time its really good next time you could writ more of what you had to do Ill blog you later
kia ora sapphire Ashton here good job i love the detail.
ReplyDeletehello sapphire good work in your bloy and have goood day bye
ReplyDeleteHello Sapphire its me Wiari i like your kiwi that you made it looks great, you should see my kiwi.
ReplyDeleteDid you take time when you made your kiwi
Hi Sapphire, It's me, Phoebe. I like the way you make the kiwi bird colour on the body, I like the kiwi bird eyes because it's so cute. I love it! Your picture of the kiwi bird is so good!!!! Did you know that kiwi bird doesn't have wings? Maybe you could do it without wings. Bye!
ReplyDeletehi your kiwi is cool and good job
ReplyDeleteHi Sapphire, it's Kareem.
ReplyDeleteIt's cool how you made it look nice and I like how the kiwi's body has feathers on it. Next time you could put a title so that it's easier to get to the blog post.
Hi Sapphire, nice job on your custom kiwi. Your blog post is very amazing as well as your kiwi. How much time did you spend on this kiwi? What is your next step? I think you did a good job on the blog post but I think you just need a better introduction and paragraphs in the post. Other than that, Great job!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Sapphire!
ReplyDeleteI like your kiwi! It's well made, and it's very cute! What shapes did it take to make this, and how long did this take to make? You did great on this blog post, but I think you might need better informaton to tell the reader all about your post. What was your favourite part of making the kiwi?
From Mikayla.
Kia ora Sapphire Acasia here!
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is amazing and I really like your post as well as your kiwi! Maybe next time you could add more information about the post and you're kiwi like for an insaple you could have made a name or something but other than that this is an amazing post! Good job
Kia ora Sapphire,
ReplyDeleteYou have done very well on the post, I love how you have made such a great kiwi. Maybe next time you could add why you did this. When did you do this? That's all from me bye.
Kia Ora Sapphire!
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent kiwi! What did you do to create it? Next time you could add more detailed elements. But great job!
Kia ora Sapphire its Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about this kiwi its really cool one quision is how did you make this kiwi. Maybe next time add a bit more info about this kiwi. Bye