I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi! we made a snowman or snowwoman I was a little hard because we have to keep doing ctrl c and ctrl v but I love it it was fun because we can dress it up!!
Hello Sapphire I'm Freya your buddy from Hornby Primary School. I like your snowman. I think its interesting. Put full stops at the end of a sentence a put a Capital I. Why did you make a girl instead of a boy?
Kia ora it's Nikau.I like your snowman that you made it's real cool.next time try to put full stops.next time reread your writing to check if it makes sense.
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Hello Sapphire I'm Freya your buddy from Hornby Primary School. I like your snowman. I think its interesting. Put full stops at the end of a sentence a put a Capital I. Why did you make a girl instead of a boy?
ReplyDeleteHi freya im sapphire i did a girl because i think im a girl so yeah
DeleteKia ora it's Nikau.I like your snowman that you made it's real cool.next time try to put full stops.next time reread your writing to check if it makes sense.
ReplyDeletehi sapphire benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put hair on the snow women
did you think about how it will turn out
why did you do this post
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