I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
In class, we have been writing about what we had done in the holidays. Me my mum and dad we had gone Ten-pin bowling. It was really fun! We did do loads of things!
Hello Sapphire! I like to see that your holiday looks fun and exciting! This is so outstanding and unique! Maybe next time some capitil I's to your I's Tino Pai! -Aimee
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Sapphire!
ReplyDeleteI like to see that your holiday looks fun and exciting!
This is so outstanding and unique!
Maybe next time some capitil I's to your I's
Tino Pai! -Aimee