I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Sapphire. At first I wasn't sure what your writing was going to be about because I couldn't see a title. I liked the slides with pictures on the most. You look like you have some good writing skills so it woukd be good to see more of these in other blog posts.
Bunny-tastic, Sapphire.That was very informative, and for some reason I can not explain, fluffy. I would like to see more pictures(slides 1-9) A title? I feel like the introduction was really the description. What do you think about that idea.I would love to hear what you have been up to through lockdown.Blog us the deets, the haps, the wass-ups. It would be great to record your thoughts and feelings. What do you think?Stay awesome and be kind.
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Kia ora Sapphire.
ReplyDeleteAt first I wasn't sure what your writing was going to be about because I couldn't see a title. I liked the slides with pictures on the most. You look like you have some good writing skills so it woukd be good to see more of these in other blog posts.
Bunny-tastic, Sapphire.That was very informative, and for some reason I can not explain, fluffy. I would like to see more pictures(slides 1-9) A title? I feel like the introduction was really the description. What do you think about that idea.I would love to hear what you have been up to through lockdown.Blog us the deets, the haps, the wass-ups. It would be great to record your thoughts and feelings. What do you think?Stay awesome and be kind.
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