I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sapphire! It's super cool that you had to hanmer, I went too once. I like how you wrote what you were doing on the way to hanmer! But maybe next time you could re-read it and add more details. Anyway other than that its amazing! bye!
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Hi Sapphire! It's super cool that you had to hanmer, I went too once. I like how you wrote what you were doing on the way to hanmer! But maybe next time you could re-read it and add more details. Anyway other than that its amazing! bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Soheilla. Thank you for your comment! and yes i will re-read My story anyways!bye!
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