I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Sapphire! I really like this slide. I like how you put in a video! The slide that says Why you should not sleep in reminds me of how I was tired and accidentally slept in a few minutes this morning. Maybe next time you should re-read the slide, Some parts don't really make sense. Other than that its amazing! Cya in class. Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Sapphire! I really like this slide. I like how you put in a video! The slide that says Why you should not sleep in reminds me of how I was tired and accidentally slept in a few minutes this morning. Maybe next time you should re-read the slide, Some parts don't really make sense. Other than that its amazing! Cya in class. Bye!
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