I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Last week we have been learning About Race Relations Day So our literacy teacher Made a slide for us and We need to Do the activities it was really fun doing this slide Well here is my work! I hope you like it.
Kia ora Sapphire. It is great to see you have done some learning about Race Relations Day. I found the things you shared here really interesting. What was your favourite part?
Hey Sapphire, just thought I would check out your blog.I thought it was colourful and bold as well as informative. I thought slide 5 could of done with a splash more colour or perhaps just repositioning the pictures so as to make the page look more full.Be well������
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ReplyDeleteyou did a good job!
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine! Thank You For Your Feedback.
DeleteKia ora Sapphire.
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you have done some learning about Race Relations Day. I found the things you shared here really interesting. What was your favourite part?
i like it when we talked about like we are from and put pictures in your county.
DeleteHey Sapphire, just thought I would check out your blog.I thought it was colourful and bold as well as informative. I thought slide 5 could of done with a splash more colour or perhaps just repositioning the pictures so as to make the page look more full.Be well������
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