I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Sapphire, Freya here from Hornby Primary School. I think your blog is really interesting. Maybe add some more words, so that we can have more information on what it is about. I think your work is really good. I wonder why did you add a lot of pictures?
Hi Sapphire, It's Ashaswi yo bff here. I think your blog is quite interesting. Maybe you could add a bit more words, and grammar corrections would help. But other than that it's AMAZING!
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Hi Sapphire, Freya here from Hornby Primary School. I think your blog is really interesting. Maybe add some more words, so that we can have more information on what it is about. I think your work is really good. I wonder why did you add a lot of pictures?
ReplyDeleteHi Sapphire,
ReplyDeleteIt's Ashaswi yo bff here. I think your blog is quite interesting. Maybe you could add a bit more words, and grammar corrections would help. But other than that it's AMAZING!
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